westheice

Hey guys so I'm trying to write better. So give me your opinions on like dialogue structure and paragraph structure.    \A Story with a monster in it.    (Introduction of the monster.)    He entered in the room and closed the door. He then quietly walked over to the table where his spear was resting. He thought to himself “If only my powers weren’t turned off, then this would be a lot easier.” The monster turned to him and walked over. “What the hell is it doing?” he thought to himself, sweat running down from his face as it slowly walks towards him.He remained still.The monster growls in front of him, drool

Child:Mother, where do monsters lurk? Mother:where do monsters lurk?Why,Their always lurking in the shadows, in under your bed, and within us Child:Within us? Mother:yes,yes child. within us all deep deep down clawing out.To be free and wreak havoc and mayhem. To do what is evil and cruel in the world. Horrid and evil to us. BUT! good to them. Child:Good to them?why is it good to them? Mother:I don't know child. But people say, It feeds their soul and that's what keeps them alive and keep doing more of it just powers them.It is always the misbehaved and mischievous they like to take. but the innocent is always ignored for they are too pu

Child:Mother, where do monsters lurk? Mother:where do monsters lurk?Why,Their always lurking in the shadows, in under your bed, and within us Child:Within us? Mother:yes,yes child. within us all deep deep down clawing out.To be free and wreak havoc and mayhem. To do what is evil and cruel in the world. Horrid and evil to us. BUT! good to them. Child:Good to them?why is it good to them? Mother:I don't know child. But people say, It feeds their soul and that's what keeps them alive and keep doing more of it just powers them.It is always the misbehaved and mischievous they like to take. but the innocent is always ignored for they are too pu